-- Rules --
-TempRule- Keep it romance-oriented!
1.) One Haiku (a three-line poem where the lines have 5, 7, and 5 syllabes each - respectively)OR One Tanka (a two-line poem where each line has 7 syllables). Please count your syllables!
2.) Please NOTE me with your addition. In this NOTE, please include the segment that comes before the piece you are adding.
Also - if I get multiple submissions to come after the same piece, I'll either:
a) add a bit to fit them all together and list them in the order I got them, or
b) I'll post the first on I got and ask the other submitters to re-write their entry or
c) do what I'm doing with these first two pieces for the new renga and call for someone else to write a mesh-piece. (It's really not as complicated as it sounds.)
Please do your best to mesh your piece with those that come before it, we're aiming for a completed picture from many perspectives, as it were.
3.) The most recently updated version of the Renga can always be found at this post, which has a link in all my journal entries. The Renga will also be found in the footer of the most recent journal entry.
4.) Feel free to ask questions and be sure to have fun!
Valentine
1.) *Virangelus
2.) *MSJames
3.) ~FallenAurora
4.) *XimonDunedain
5.) =curiosity
6.) ~Deadpoet-16
7.) *MSJames
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Caress, amore.
My red lips twitch against your
kiss, like morning mist.
drifting in from the lake
as the sun drops from view
Ah! But is it dream
To think you are still within
My withering touch?
Ah! But is it dream
To think you are still within
My withering touch?
"Whither has thine heart
gone, at what cost, hitherto
unimagined lost"
Or so a love-worn
Soul once cried to her love
Only to be answered:
Your lips caress, bloom
Full bright in our rosy dawn.
Your eyes are my sun
warming the cold night
of my winter heart
Devious Comments
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my mom's page
support artists! I mean it!
i wish coke was still cola
and a joint was a bad place to be
-merle haggard
my curiosity doth demand it.
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Renga!
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my mom's page
support artists! I mean it!
i wish coke was still cola
and a joint was a bad place to be
-merle haggard
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Renga!
lethal distraction;
gentle sunrise, day's debut,
interrupted force.
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my mom's page
support artists! I mean it!
i wish coke was still cola
and a joint was a bad place to be
-merle haggard
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Renga!
Maybe I can use isis for something else in the future.
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my mom's page
support artists! I mean it!
i wish coke was still cola
and a joint was a bad place to be
-merle haggard
--
Renga!
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my mom's page
support artists! I mean it!
i wish coke was still cola
and a joint was a bad place to be
-merle haggard
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Gone
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